A listing description has one job: answer the question the buyer typed, in the first two lines, before the fold. Generated copy does the opposite. It opens with atmosphere, mentions the category twice, and buries the actual answer in paragraph four, which most buyers never reach.
On mobile, a description is read in about four seconds of thumb-scrolling between the photos and the reviews. That window is spent looking for the one detail that decides the purchase: will it fit, will it work with what I already own, how long until it arrives.
Write for that window. The opening should be the answer, not the mood. Anyone who needs more detail will keep reading; anyone who needed the answer has already stopped.
Four of them show up in almost every AI-written listing description:
None of these are grammar problems. They are ordering problems, which is why they are cheap to fix.
Start by writing the answer in your own words as a single sentence, as if replying to one buyer who asked. That sentence becomes the first line. Everything before it was throat-clearing; delete it.
Then read the listing and strike every sentence that is also true of a competing product. If a sentence survives that test, keep it and move it higher. What remains is usually about compatibility, sizing and what is in the box, the material buyers actually need.
Last, add the limits. What size it does not fit, what is not included, what takes longer than people expect. Written plainly, these reduce returns and read more trustworthy than any adjective would.
| What people usually write | What it looks like after |
|---|---|
| Elevate your kitchen with this premium quality storage solution, crafted with durable materials for a modern home. | Holds six 500ml bottles upright on a 22cm shelf. Steel frame, plastic trays, and it does not fit fridges narrower than 55cm. |
| This versatile, elegant item makes a thoughtful gift for any occasion and complements any decor. | One size, 30cm across. Sits flat on a counter; it does not hang on a wall and there are no mounting holes. |
| Experience the difference of our innovative design that combines style and functionality seamlessly. | Dishwasher safe, except the two rubber feet, those come off and go in by hand. Two minutes to reassemble. |
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See what it does Pricing — US$15/monthOnly where a human would naturally say it. Repetition that exists for the algorithm is the thing readers notice first.
As long as it takes to answer fit, contents and limits, usually 120 to 200 words. Length beyond that does not get read.
Yes, and they are usually read more than the description. The same ordering rule applies: the answer goes first.
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